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Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« on: June 03, 2009, 06:53:18 PM »
This is a bare bones idea but...
 
The primary antagonist will be my boy, Levankua, and will climax with a fight to the death between him and Tempest.  I want to do this after the hell arc.
 
Here's the skeleton of the plot:
 
1.  Levankua's minions sneak into the Soul Society and steal some technology.  This provokes a responce from the Shinigami.  A group of Tempest and several 3rd seats and Lts will hunt down and confront Levankua.  After some fighting Levankua's group flees into an unsupervised part of Hueco Mundo temporarily.
 
2.  Less than a week later, Levankua and his men have once again provoked the Shinigami.  The Primera Espada decides that an Espada should deal with the traitor.  Both a captain and an espada, and possibly a daga, will fight and destroy Levankua's group, leaving only Levankua to escape after recieving injury.
 
3. Unable to hide in Hueco Mundo, Levankua is forced to take refuge in the human world.  Tempest locates him and fights him for the last time.
 
Please...this could really use some polish like a dirty car needs a wash
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 06:55:28 PM »
Well... why would the Espada care as long as they aren't being attacked. So they would probably have to do something to the Espada to warrant a response. Unless Lev is saying that he is the Espada and smearing their name or something
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 06:58:18 PM »
Isn't Levankua like a Lt. level and you're a high captain? Other than that, I don't see any problems with it for it being a mini-arc. >_>

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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2009, 07:01:37 PM »
and what Kashii said
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2009, 07:05:50 PM »
Isn't Levankua like a Lt. level and you're a high captain? Other than that, I don't see any problems with it for it being a mini-arc. >_>

Um...he got better >______________>

(I had originally wanted them to be on the same level...but of course Tempest got up to captain and all the espada spots were filled >___________>)

Well... why would the Espada care as long as they aren't being attacked. So they would probably have to do something to the Espada to warrant a response. Unless Lev is saying that he is the Espada and smearing their name or something

Just trying to give some oppertunity to all groups...I was going to say they ate lots of dudes in Hueco Mundo, but the Espada don't give a fuck about their own fodder...
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2009, 07:14:35 PM »
The Time Skip will happen after Hell Arc, followed by an opening Espada Event.

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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2009, 07:25:42 PM »
The Time Skip will happen after Hell Arc, followed by an opening Espada Event.

I was counting on the Time skip...This will be after those then...
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2009, 07:33:36 PM »
The Time Skip will happen after Hell Arc, followed by an opening Espada Event.

Any idea what's going to happen to the two Captain spots and the Vizard group at this point?
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2009, 07:43:06 PM »
The Time Skip will happen after Hell Arc, followed by an opening Espada Event.

Any idea what's going to happen to the two Captain spots and the Vizard group at this point?

The two captain spots will be filled by Dante and Virgil...the vizards will be erased from existence
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #9 on: June 03, 2009, 08:32:35 PM »
Just because you hate the Vizards that doesn't mean everyone will >___>
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #10 on: June 03, 2009, 08:34:49 PM »
Just because you hate the Vizards that doesn't mean everyone will >___>

I was just kidding, seeing as I said Dante and Virgil (Vergil?) from DMC would be the replacement captains...
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #11 on: June 03, 2009, 08:36:31 PM »
wasn't sure if all of that statement twas
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2009, 08:58:14 PM »
As Lt of Squad 8 with Bankai, obviously Oz, you should get it. It's the only fair thing to do.
  
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #13 on: June 03, 2009, 09:06:03 PM »
What about Div 12?

I'd say if we ignore ooc reasons then Kael obviously would get the spot. But he seems to have a major character in every faction and that hardly seems fair considering some don't have any.

Ohhhhh if Crank rejoins SF in an active sense he should be made the Captain of Squad 12!!!!!! >.>
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Re: Mini Arc: Chasing Away the Darkness
« Reply #14 on: June 04, 2009, 01:52:18 PM »
hm...okay...anyways I could merely disclude the arrancar from the mini arc...that would work as well...

The way I have it set up...2 captains other than myself and 4 or 5 others can join...
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